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Okay, I just try to give a critique based on vision with this artwork. the things should be underlined are:

1. bone/muscle movement
based on my view that I think she's look hurt specially on her back. she looks trying to relax on "side ship" (ah I don't know what's the correct name for it haha) but her hips looks stiff

2. The perspective
as the title, the perspective looks off for several area, for example those barrels side shouldn't fully showed depending on the perspective, the camera should only look barrels top. also the "cube perspective" of the fence (again, I dunno the correct name for it XD ) , it's looks like there's no perspective angle between near and far fence.

3. atmosphere
it's sea, and also it's morning/day which the sky should looks clear . so the thing I'll notice is "Everywhere must be BLUE" because of huge sea and and sky, then the color reflection should polished on the whole picture to make it more realistic.

p.s: I'm not a native English speaker so yeah.. just ignore my bad English <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>